Undone by His Touch

Passion Romance Undone by His Touch

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Undone by His Touch

One day, Chloe, the housekeeper of the wealthy Carstairs family's villa, meets a mysterious man by the mansion's pool. He has a strong, sun-kissed body with a long scar running down his thigh and a deep scar carved into his cheek. Learning that Declan is the owner of the house, Chloe tries to hide that she was gawking at her boss by greeting him. It is then that she realizes that he is practically blind. It is the beginning of their dangerous relationship, and Declan is on a mission to find the woman who jilted his deceased little brother.

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Preview 30 Pages
Pages 129 Pages

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4.4 (29 customer reviews)
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The preview was the best part 3  3

Don’t get me wrong. The rest wasn’t bad, but things just fell out of sync a bit. In the preview and a few pages beyond, the story has a good flow and continuity. We get the mystery of the blonde, the relationship is developing, we get hints there is something off with the deceased brother… things are moving along nicely, then we hit The Crisis and it’s not just the relationship that’s jarred. From that point on the story jerks in places. At least once it felt like a page or so was missing, although clearly that wasn’t the case. And there were questions that could have been addressed (vague pronouns ahead) – So how exactly did he get those injuries? Why was he blind? How did sleeping with the heroine help? If she “left me” why was she still there? Are we certain there is absolutely NO symptoms of this aberrant behavior prior to meeting her that can be remembered? If not, why? And if not, what exactly changed his mind about trusting her in spite of evidence all of a sudden? Just how did he know she was pregnant? It’s not that it wasn’t a readable story without these issues being addressed, but it would have been a much better story with them. I bought this on sale, and paid a little more than I wish I had. If you are interested in this story, I, myself, would recommend getting it on sale, or renting and deciding if it’s worth upgrading after you read it.

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I like it a lot but... 4  4

I like it a lot but I feel like the problem wasn't really resolved. I wish there was more scenes where the heroine's innocence is more proven, I wish that the hero suffer a little bit more with all the things that he said to the heroine. I just wish that there was more emotion put on the later part. But all in all I liked it!

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Scars from the past... 4  4

Lovely book, I like the hero's strength and impetuosity, even if he's too skeptical about the heroine's intentions and feelings. The heroine, on the other side, is very patient and caring towards the hero's scars, both physical and inner. Worth reading, of course!

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